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Thursday, June 11, 2020

drinosaur story

angus

braking news slowly a  blue spotty head started to rise out of the water it was a big dinosaurs and destroy the town 


1 comment:

  1. What a good start you made on this. I like that you have said that the dinosaurs head rose out of the water. Next time do you think you could aim to write three lines?

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